Friday, September 24, 2010

The Blackout

            I woke up one night startled at the sound of crashing; I had rushed to the deck to find the side of the ship splintered by a large iceberg, at first it seemed like no damage at all, but then I looked down to the side and a hole was quit prevalent even at this late hour. Once everyone else had heard the noise they too ran up the to see the uproar. It was now clear we had to leave the ship; I ran back under the deck to find the whole floor flooded with water, I thought to myself “we are doomed”. I ran up and they had already started deploying the boats. I jumped on one holding this journal tight, it was the only friend I had.

            It was about ten of us blindly rowing forward, I felt like a horse blindly following the rider’s orders. We had absolutely no idea where we were going; we just followed DeLong’s boat for hours on end. Now that we were exposed to the cold air of the night my skin felt like it was going to rip off any second. Thank god for my trench coat my skin was not in direct contact with the air. Now that we were stranded on this cramped boat we only had an insufficient amount of food for even three days. We had one loaf of bread and a moldy cracker for each individual on the boat.
            We continued heading north for eight days and nine nights. The ocean had become increasingly reckless, and there was still no sight of landmass. It was seemingly becoming a hopeless situation and I felt no need to entertain the fact that there was any chance of me living through this mess. Sudden overflow of water in the boat caused us to collapse into the water. All I saw was my journal sink to the bottom, I swam down to catch it then felt an immensely painful pound on my head that seemed to be from an ore that fell from the ship. After this everything was a haze…

6 comments:

  1. This is a thrilling story that is keeping me on the edge. You should write the next part now so i can read it! Keep up the good work Akash.

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  2. I'm diggin' the story Akash. I love the detail and your diction. You definitely have me on edge just as Kevinsky is. Keep the story coming!

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  3. nice story, I like that hes wearing a trench coat

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  4. note that you need to read the blog before this to make complete sense of this blog hahah

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  5. I'm totally digging this idea for a serial story. Just curious, Akash: what is the origin of your interest in writing about exploration of the North Pole in olden times? Just curious. There is a great song by Josh Ritter (singer/songwriter on the folk side of pop) called "Another New World" about the first explorers sailing up to the North Pole. This blog remind me of that- give it a listen if you get a chance.

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  6. i mean, i wanted to write some sort of story and i couldnt think of anything that could remotely relate to class, so this came to mind. ill take a look at the song, hopefully it gives me some ideas of what to write for my next blog

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